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XdBoYxD2010
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|  Subject: My poem...  Tue Apr 28, 2009 4:19 pm | |
| Heres a poem i wrote preatty fast
Lives is short
Dont be scared of it ending
Of what it can hide live is like
A river go at it at full speed and never stop
To look back | |
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XdBoYxD2010
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| | Subject: Re: My poem... Fri May 08, 2009 1:31 pm | |
| comment or ur banned  jkjk | |
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stevenF50
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| | Subject: Re: My poem... Fri May 08, 2009 1:33 pm | |
| But theres no hippo so I refuse to comment lol
Nice poem 9/10 | |
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Memelolz
mail pengy
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Age : 26
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| | Subject: Re: My poem... Fri May 08, 2009 6:22 pm | |
| i just dont get the river thing
but
its niceeeeeeeeeeeee
~memelolz | |
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XdBoYxD2010
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| | Subject: Re: My poem... Fri May 08, 2009 10:15 pm | |
| A river never stop's going and it doesnt look back. | |
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babyCP
Penguin pilot
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Location : Your actually reading this? :O
| | Subject: Re: My poem... Sat May 09, 2009 7:34 am | |
| That's really nice jonasbnick.  | |
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Allie207
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Location : If your reading this your a STALKER thats right I said the s word!!
| | Subject: Re: My poem... Sat May 09, 2009 9:14 am | |
| 9\10 I dont really get but it seems to mean something!!  | |
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stevenF50
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| | Subject: Re: My poem... Sat May 09, 2009 9:49 am | |
| The river meens its goes on with life but it never looks back at past | |
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Hershey8465
dance club pengy
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Join date : 2009-05-12
Age : 26
Location : If you're reading this, GET A LIFE!!! XD
| | Subject: Re: My poem... Tue May 12, 2009 7:47 pm | |
| That's really good! I rate it 9/10 | |
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pufflelover
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| | Subject: Re: My poem... Wed May 13, 2009 1:50 am | |
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3oh3nerd998
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| | Subject: Re: My poem... Wed Jan 13, 2010 5:10 pm | |
| I get it. Like the way of life. The life cycle. Heaven. I just love poems! Especilly deep ones! | |
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XdBoYxD2010
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| | Subject: Re: My poem... Wed Jan 13, 2010 5:14 pm | |
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Allie207
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| | Subject: Re: My poem... Fri Jan 22, 2010 9:12 pm | |
| I like ones that actually mean something not one about the flower in your front yard XD
(unless you truly love that flower lol) | |
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